Thursday, January 28, 2010
Jeong #2
HOW TO TELL A STORY
Life on the Missississippi
The Notorious Jumping Frog of Calaveras County
Sunday, January 24, 2010
Jeong #1
Friday, January 22, 2010
God in her onway -324
Emily Dickinson over Whitman
So far my class and I have only read and gone over Walt Whitman and Emily Dickinson and out of the two I personally enjoy Emily’s work more than Walt’s. Even though Whitman’s poem are more up beat and seem to have more of a positive voice to it, Emily seems to have this air deepness in her poems and I like that. Also she seems to enjoy life and the beauty it has. In some of her poems she talks about how she comes across god or experiences a divine feeling out in nature like in, “Winter Afternoons.” This poem describes the beauty in the mountains of the Himalayas and that no matter what we do we can’t affect this.
She’s very deep in all of her poems; it doesn’t matter what she talks about wether it be a divine experience to experiencing love or even sorrow. Some people say she is a very depressed poet but what I see is the longing for love and affection like in her poem “If you were coming in the Fall.” I see how people could get the idea that she is all doom and gloom because at first glance I thought she was talking about woe is me to be alone and have no one here with me. After reading through it several times I started to get more of an understanding of it and what it truly was saying. What she was saying was if she knew when the one she loves was coming to visit she would wait for him, counting down the days/months/years it would take for him to arrive but since she doesn’t know the waiting is tearing her up inside. She describes what true love is in a way by saying no matter how long it takes I will wait for you to come. To me Emily Dickinson’s work is all about perception and the outlook of the person who is reading it. Dickinson is not all about sorrow and death, even though she mentions it a lot in her poems, she is the one who is just thinking outside the box and talking about real life issues or events in another manner.
Emily Dickinson
“…To a Heart in port—
Done with the Compass—
Done with the Chart!
Rowing in Eden—
Ah, the Sea!
Might I but moor—Tonight—
In Thee!”
She is obviously looking for love- maybe not her true love, but some sort of love. However, she has given up looking, “Done with the Compass, Done with the Chart!” but if one was to look closely, they would notice that the capital “T” in the word, “Thee.” This gives the impression that she has found her love in God, and that tonight- each night rather- she will be spending her time with Him.
The second poem makes the speaker, or Emily Dickinson, seem to be drunk. But on what though?
“I taste the liquor never brewed—
…Inebriate of Air—am I—“
This is very deep in my opinion. She is drunk off of air? No, my friend; she is drunk off of life! The liquor which was “never brewed,” and her being “Inebriate of Air” leads the reader to think she is in love with nature, and that it is her own brand of heroine.
Emily Dickinson
Emily Dickinson’s poems are very deep. It takes more than the usual once or twice over to pick up her intended message. When I first read the assignments from her, I was greatly unimpressed. I thought it was poor writing and confusing. However, once we started breaking down the poems in class, I realized how much she puts into each one. There was a deeper meaning behind every one and I was completely oblivious. I began to appreciate her writing much more.
In her poem “Success is counted sweetest”, she speaks of winning and losing. This poem relates well to the audience because everyone has had time of triumphs and times of defeat. She does a good job bringing the memories of these times out in the reader. In “Wild Nights”, she uses capitalization and punctuation to her advantage to express excitement and emphasize the energy of the poem. She speaks of wild nights or a good time with a friend but we know from her previous poems that her idea of a good time is just breathing in the free air and being around nature. She speaks of tasting “a liquor never brewed”, and being “inebriate of air” in her poem 214. This just shows she needs no outside force to enjoy life.
Thursday, January 21, 2010
Vigil Strange
Emily Dickinson "67"
In the pom "67", Emily Dickinson states that "Success is counted sweetest by those who never succeed". In agreement, I support Dickinson with the hopes that everyone will take this poem in to considerateion and extract what I myself learned from it. When a veteran retires from the military, he looks back at all the great thing he has accomplished. Just as I did, you can find all of the hard work you poured into what you wanted has taken you where somewhere you never thought you could go.
As he defeated-dying-
On whose forbidden ear
The distant strains of triumph
Burst agonized and clear!
This states that those who win over and over again only know success and will feel the sting of loss more so than a man who has felt defeat more often. Humility is the key to a successful career and for one that seeks much to gain and learn. A man who can take a crushing failure often and only come back to try once more will hold victory to his own heart more so than any other.
The Dalliance of the Eagles/Wild Nights Whitman/Dickerson
The Dalliance of the Eagles
Wednesday, January 20, 2010
Welcome to ENG 252 04
Welcome to the ENG 252 04 blog!
Posting guidelines:
You may leave a blog post on any of the readings that we’ve read for that week. Blogs are due on Fridays for MWF classes and Thursdays for TTh classes, and comments for each blog will be due on the following Wednesday for MWF classes and the following Tuesday for TTh classes. Each blog post should be at least 200 words, and each comment should be at least 100 words (excluding quotes, if any). If you wish to write more than the minimum, you may certainly do so.
Grading:
9-10 points
· Minimum posting requirements met and at times exceeded
· Contributions are timely
· Evidence of active engagement with assigned texts and classmates’ postings
· Ideas are fully developed
· Postings suggest strong awareness of the larger conversation taking place on the blog
8 points
· Minimum posting requirements met
· Contributions are timely, with only an occasional late arrival
· Evidence of active engagement with assigned texts and classmates’ postings
· Ideas are sufficiently developed
· Postings suggest sufficient awareness of the larger conversation taking place on the blog
7 points
· Minimum posting requirements not consistently met
· Contributions are not timely
· Insufficient engagement with assigned texts and classmates’ postings
· Claims are not sufficiently developed
· Postings suggest limited awareness of the larger conversation taking place on the blog
Below 6 points
· Minimum posting requirements not met
· Contributions are not timely
· Little engagement with assigned texts and classmates’ postings
· Claims are not developed
· Postings suggest unawareness of the larger conversation taking place on the blog